Wednesday, 11 May 2016

Puppis

Hope you like it

4 comments:

  1. I like the way you have used those pitchers I think that you should work capital letters

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  2. I like the way you have used those words I think you should work on full stops.

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  3. Good job Liam I like how you have writen it, however you need to work on your spelling. You get a ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)+ yolo bro!

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    1. sorry I was men't to put ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)+

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