Hokitika, New Zealand
I like the way you have used those pitchers I think that you should work capital letters
I like the way you have used those words I think you should work on full stops.
Good job Liam I like how you have writen it, however you need to work on your spelling. You get a ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)+ yolo bro!
sorry I was men't to put ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)+
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